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[rebellious]

Tear
Dropping from the eye of a scorned soul

A sigh
Passing through the lips of am unworthy heart
Tormented by pass failures
This cry is one of true sorrow

Pain
The kind that awakens even the strongest
Rushing through mind, not so much body
To make a home in the wild

Thus came the giggle
The most unpleasant giggle
Filled with the emptiness of a drunks bottle
Filled with all the despair the world has to offer
Filled with anger and vengeance

Deranged?
Yes!
But why?

That tear was one a million regular tears couldn't fill
Holding the weight of the world
It moved slowly
Gliding down the face of sincerity into a small puddle
A puddle of past dreams
Past goals
Past determinations that too just as this
Fell into the lifeless pit of shame

But with great failures
Rise great successes
Greatness
A gift given though you rest in doubt
God
A joy giver
Though you're facing many trials

[Dora]

rebelious I love the discriptions.
I can see the tears, the puddle, the longing soul.
Seeking for true love, for understanding, for security.
Your poem touched me as it will others.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep sharing them sis.
You have a talent not everyone posseses.