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[Angelbaby5460]

Jesus

You are my strength
When I am weak
No where to turn
But to your feet

On my knees
I shall pray
Cast these demons
Far far away

In your arms
I shall be
Took all the pain
Away from me

Taken to the cross
So I shall live
All of your life
You had to give

You are my shelter
I shall keep
Saving us all
Even me

You are my eyes
Now I shall see
All of your beauty
Made for me

Died for me
But rose again
Take my sins away
Over and over again

May add more again in time but complete as for now. Tell me what ya think.

Amanda

[JCsmediator]

I think ya got music in the making sounds like songs ...

angel thats awesome you need to write some christian recording studios and I just told leap on other post I was given a publishing company and they help publish ur book maybe a book in song//poetry can addd daily scripture and a lil testamony ...

GB u both and use ya gifts wooo hoo

but if ya doooo write ya music in an email and send it bak to you so u have date of when you wrote it cuz of copy right reasons and mail a copy in the mail and dont open it keep it as ur copy tooo ...

GB

[momof3]

Angel.............have read all of your poems youve posted here and i agree, they sound like songs..and they really are, songs from your heart. keep writing sis. they are beautiful, truthful and touching. love you sis......keep the faith, share the truth, and let Him heal.

love in Jesus,
momo

[Guest]

Angelbaby, That is a beautiful poem and i agree it does sound like a song. You are very talented!