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Just a lil disclaimer here I am not feeling this way at the moment. Also this may be triggering not sure.

My Last Goodbye

I thank you for being there
To try and help calm the fears
But the time is near
To say my last goodbye

You did the best you could
You saved me when others said they wouldn't
But tonight I am on my own
So i'll say my last goodbye

I'm not going to bug you anymore
I know I have caused enough pain
Maybe I will take up the blade
And say my last goodbye

There's no saving me now
You're far too late
A gun to my head *Ka Bang*
In my last dying breath I will say goodbye

Writen by Amanda (me)

Amanda,

Thank you for sharing sis...

Very powerful poem which could bring up much good discussion in regards to this solution to pain and other feelings...

I hope you can make it to the new program, Heartlight, on Thursday nights 7pm est/6pm cst and bring this or another piece of your poetry! We are going to start looking at themes in our original prose and how the Spirit can move others into action thru it. You have a gift, lil sis. Hope to see you share even more of it

Luv ya always,
Susi