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The Message

Among the clouds the chariot I saw
A thousand white horses in teams did draw
With hoofs of iron and breath of flame
Amid the clamor I heard my name

Touching upon the Earth of green
They came to rest near a sleepy stream
I saw this chariot was made of gold
Filled with clouds as the thunder rolled

To my face in the dust I fell
Dead or alive I could not tell
Then I was floating in the air
To say a word I could not dare

Then I heard the voice of Him
The Mighty One who rode within
Telling me what I must know
What to do and where to go


Tell the people what I have said
For I'm alive who once was dead
I died to forgive them of their sin
And say to them He walks again

Again I fell into the dust
The chariot rose with a mighty gust
And in a moment it was gone
All was quiet, all was calm

So here I stand before you now
With this message from in that cloud
Turn away from your life of sin
Call to Jesus and walk with Him


Written January 2011. Given by the Spirit to be shared with all but claimed by none.All praise and glory belong to Him.

Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful.

Thank you for sharing, TimelessOne.

God bless and keep you,
Sister Mack

AWESOME poem TimelessOne.
You can tell He was upon you as you wrote this, I write some too but have only a few that was given by Him and I could feel His presence with me as I wrote them..IT WAS AN AWESOME FEELING!!
it was like He was giving me the words, one of them was written in about 20 minutes with nothing at the start, it was great.

God bless and welcome to the Oasis

cool poem,,, good job

wow awesome... Amen!