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Thanks for the title unshakeable :)

PostPosted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 4:45 am
by Angelbaby5460
True Friendship

I was always with her through thick and thin
I told her she could call me even if she was two sheets to the wind
That night she did not call me I knew something was far too wrong

The next day I got that phone calls that every friend dreads
It was the cops saying I should come quick
She was nearly dead from a bad accident
They said she will be lucky if she lived

I wish I could of done something else
Before this horrible thing happened
I told her I would stay by her side
Til the day that she died

I told her she should quit
Before it was too late
Now what I fear the most is
That day has come and I think its too late

I was her friend before she started drinking
I was her friend when she started drinking
But what I will never forget is that day when
I became her friend when she quit drinking

PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:52 pm
by Dora
Cool Angel, Keep writting, keep posting. So enjoy them!

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:36 pm
by ---
I love all of your poems!!

my suggestions for the title would be:
1) Friendship
2)True Friendship
3)Drinking

(Use them only if you wish ;) )

Keep writing sis
God bless you,
unshakeable